Majestic Fantasist

Thank you, all. As you can tell, presenting was not the end of the world, no matter how much it felt like it. ;) But this is all very helpful, ...

I’m impressed by your ability to make something that might seem cliché (wizards with runes and talking wolves) original. It’s hard to critique after only reading the prologue, so I ...

You added more description! Hurray!!! Still, make sure that what you are writing is clear! I am looking forward to reading more!

wow, I would freak out if I had a dream like that! It was really good, your description was great!